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ShanaNoShakugan
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on December 15th 2011, 1:51 pm
The koi enjoys the spring showers.
The koi fears nothing.
The koi thinks it will live forever.
The koi never retreats.
The koi gets eaten by the snakefish.

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on December 15th 2011, 2:12 pm
whats a haiku?

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on December 15th 2011, 5:06 pm
It's a 5 sentence poem like I posted above. Wink

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on December 15th 2011, 5:39 pm
Swept across the ocean's waves at night.
Not another human soul in sight.
I felt the oceanspray on my face.
As upon the starlit sky I gazed.
I sighed with the subtle whisper of the waves.

Side Note: Please don't judge this poem too critically, because it's been many years since I've even bothered to try composing. Plus, I only spent approximately 4 1/2 minutes producing this.
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on December 15th 2011, 6:01 pm
Very good. Surprised

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on December 15th 2011, 8:57 pm
WiiAboutU wrote:Swept across the ocean's waves at night.
Not another human soul in sight.
I felt the oceanspray on my face.
As upon the starlit sky I gazed.
I sighed with the subtle whisper of the waves.

Side Note: Please don't judge this poem too critically, because it's been many years since I've even bothered to try composing. Plus, I only spent approximately 4 1/2 minutes producing this.

thats actually good dude.

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on December 15th 2011, 9:18 pm
Thanks for your acceptance guys. Embarassed
I'll try an produce some more poems for this thread in the future. Although, it might take some time to get my creative juices flowing again.



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on December 15th 2011, 9:24 pm
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Once there was a Lord.
Who went by the name Tretton.
Who spent his days bashing Nintendo.
One day he angered the lords of a website.
He was banned for 30 days. Razz

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on December 16th 2011, 8:29 am
Rukiafan wrote:Once there was a Lord.
Who went by the name Tretton.
Who spent his days bashing Nintendo.
One day he angered the lords of a website.
He was banned for 30 days. Razz

All hail the Lords of Wiiwarewave

LOL nice one

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